Lose the Jargon, Land the Interview: Part 1
As you craft your resume, keep in mind these important points:
**1. Your MOS likely means nothing to a civilian**
**2. Your role within the military is a foreign language to most you’ll interview with**
**3. Pretend you’re explaining your job to your non-military mother**
**4. Civilianize**
There are more than 10,000 skills classifications from all the branches of service. To an Army veteran, “11B” paints an entire picture of infantry skills. But for a civilian hiring manager it means nothing. So, use your MOS as a jumping off point to tell your story and paint a picture of what you did. You must communicate your leadership and technical skills, and "11B" doesn’t do that.
###Your role within the military is probably completely foreign to civilians###
They cannot understand what being a platoon leader means if they don’t know what a platoon is. You must break down your duties and give them CONTEXT. Draw parallels between what you’ve already done in the military and what you can do for their company.
• Convey the size of your organization. Platoon, squad, or company won't make sense. Instead, say something like "Led a group of 40 personnel and provided security and combat operations while deployed to Iraq."
• Conveying the number of people you led or served with will help frame your experience. A civilian recruiter can then think: "That’s like Joe over in the distribution center. He’s leading 40 people as a warehouse manager."
• Include budgets, figures, and responsibilities.
• If you held a maintenance role, consider these two approaches:
**No:** mechanic in a tank battalion
**Yes:** maintenance mechanic concentrating on maintenance and electrical issues for a fleet of track vehicles in support of a battalion of several hundred people. Or, if you supervised junior personnel as a missile technician, write missile technician and add (supervisor).
The more precisely you convey your value in terms civilian employers will understand, the closer you will get to scoring an interview.